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PostSubject: sLeepems^^   Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:07 am
Yawn

3 'o'clock
Why can't I sleep?
I toss and turn, I sing I read
Why can't I stop worrying?
Those sheep don't work
And the house to quiet
I light my candles and silently sit.
My feet are frozen
My lips are dry
I think of you
And tears fall from my eyes
The dark room holds my fears
Like a mother holds her child
I crawl back in bed
And curl up in a ball
I am exhausted
But for some reason
I can not sleep at ALL!

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PostSubject: Re: sLeepems^^   Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:51 pm
parang isomnia yan...
or paranoid...
waah....
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PostSubject: Re: sLeepems^^   Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:39 am
i think your good in doing more Light-oriented poems,

dark\depressing poems are good, but try to variate .
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