Shadowing Illness

Subject: Shadowing Illness Sun Dec 02, 2007 12:08 am

SHADOWING ILLNESS

Everything in me is nothing but a dark cloud.

Which will not make ayone proud.

Rain has come singing melodies of melancholy

And all the hurting that happened on me.

Now that the hope in the bottle is gone .

What will happen to the yearnings I've done?

Nothingness threats to ruin me.

How can I fight if the bottle has gone empty?

How will I prove that I am somebody,

If all in the world thinks I am nobody?

How will I show that there's me still,

If a big shadow is covering me ill.

How will I move into the light of life,

If an Eclipse started to hold tight?

Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:56 am

nice.. nice.. never lose hope. remind yourself of God. He alone is a reason to fight. He's our hope. ung line na "How will I prove that I am somebody, If all in the world thinks I am nobody?" si God lang naman ang dapat iplease natin. tska we don't have to prove to God that we're somebody kasi He knows us very well na. weeeeeeeeh! cheers

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Anbu Age : 23 Joined : 29 Nov 2007 Posts : 499

wow agree!!!

ika nga you cannot please everybody

just do what you think is ryt and dont

expect to please everyone!! as long

as you know that you are in the ryt way!!

Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Mon Dec 03, 2007 8:13 am

share ko lng itong nabasa ko kanina sa bible.. related naman ito sa poem mo. Smile

John 2:24-25 "but Jesus would not trust Himself to them because He knew them all, and did not need anyone to testify about human nature. He Himself understood it well."
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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:45 pm

Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:53 pm

Shienny.. ewan lang ha pero parang naiintindihan ko ng mabuti ung poem at makarelate ako.. Two thumbs up.. pero alam mo dyan si God.. kahit cya lang kasama natin magiging happy tayo for the rest of our lives.. God bless keep on doing this kind of things.. inspiring po.. cheers

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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Fri Dec 07, 2007 9:40 am

tnx a lot... yeah! si GOD lang talaga and only Him ang dapat na iplease...
gawa ko itong poem na 'to about four years ago... ngayon nga lang ako eh nagkaron ng lakas ng loob para i post o i publish.. kc nga those things in the past that I have experienced made me a better person... Kudos kay GOD! cheers

Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Fri Dec 07, 2007 11:43 am

Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Fri Dec 07, 2007 3:40 pm

ok ah... ang ganda ng poem.. pwede mo ba ako maka request sa yo.. gawan mo me ng poem pls.. about friendship... tapos naging lovers...
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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Fri Dec 07, 2007 4:57 pm

kaw lngmakaexpress nyan
Doy na maaus...
kasi bka ndi pa yan na experience ng author
mas maganda pag ikaw gumawa
mas maappreciate mo..
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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Fri Dec 07, 2007 8:06 pm

weeeeh! continue sharing your talent lng. after all, through this you're also expressing yourself. cheers

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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Sat Dec 08, 2007 10:43 am

Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:03 pm

ok lang.. naaapreciate naman ng mga members d2 ang talents and skills ng bawat isa.. dont worry Wink

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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:39 pm

galing nman ng poem....idol na kita!
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Subject: Re: Shadowing Illness Sat Dec 08, 2007 5:58 pm