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shatteredangel
Akatsuki
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CancerSnake
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PostSubject: old poem, new post   Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:28 pm

Shattered Heaven

a fragile thing of unspeakable beauty...
a tainted glass of unkown mystery...
you mesmerize me...you blinded me...
a cruel way of destiny...

like a shadow dancing in the light...
like the core of a jewel,untouched...
my world is crumbling...
I was lost...answers I was seeking...

like the rainbows of the moon...
like the darkness of the sun...
rare...once in a lifetime...
I tried to reach...to figure...

I was lost...
I was shattered...
Everythings a blur...


SHATTERED HEAVEN II

Darkness falls...
Time stops...
tears forever sworn to be hidden...
I lament...stunned by a maiden...

Death chokes me...
heaven rejects me...
Im lost...nowhere to go...
I reached...I failed...I fell...

Deafened by silence...
Love was silent...
no clues...no answers...
full of questions...mysteries...unknown beauty...

Forever seemed to short for me...
times running to fast...
piece by piece I break down...
SHATTERED...


Shattered Heaven III

The Pieces reflect the whole
The soul slips away
No matter how hard I try...
I remain shattered

The pieces gathered
Destroyed for eternity
Lost in Oblivion
I am floating endlessly.

I no longer want to interfere
The cause is lost
my death already forseen
but my life remains unending

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CancerSnake
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:52 am

reminiscing...haha...poem na ginawa ko for one of my HS crush.
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AriesSnake
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:51 pm

writer ka?

i appreciate your poems.

hehe!

emotional.
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:43 pm

maganda xa...
ingat lang baka may
kumuha...
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:19 pm

wow. . how nice
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eliza ysabelle :]
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:30 pm

gandaa.. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:37 pm

ndi man
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:43 pm

.,wow.,

ganda pag ka compose ahh

up to part 3 pa..,,
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Thu Nov 20, 2008 12:06 pm

wow!! how emotional.
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CancerSnake
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Thu Nov 27, 2008 9:56 pm

lingaw gud ang story nito na poem...Very Happy

may crush kasi ako na lower year sa akin nung 4th year ako.tapos nung 3rd year pa ako crush ko na xa ng matagal na..napapansin pansin ko na.eto ung theme ng 1st chapter kasi torpe maxado ako sige lang tingin.:p

2nd chapter naman 4th year na ako.nag amin na ako sa kanya and all.friends na din kami nun that time.kasi klasmate nya uyab ng barkada ko.pero nung nag amin ako nag layo xa.nahiya and all.sige ako taka ano gawin ko.sige ako text tanong and all tapos wala talaga reply.

3rd chapter naman graduation naman..wala na jud.move on na lang...:p
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Thu Nov 27, 2008 10:07 pm

may mas mahaba pa ako dito...5 chapters talaga.
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:51 am

ganda ganda naman. ^^ how emOo. ^^
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TaurusMonkey
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Mon Dec 01, 2008 7:48 am

Ok lang. nakakapagod mag basa.
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Mon Dec 01, 2008 12:53 pm

..,,haha nc man..,, kahit mahaba..,,
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PostSubject: Re: old poem, new post   Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:46 pm

tnx!! ^^ ipasa ko siguro xa sa mintech or sa scintilla.
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