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insomniatic_poet
Anbu Assasin
 
Age : 19
Joined : 10 Dec 2007
Posts : 131
 |  Subject: My Beautiful Facade  Wed Dec 12, 2007 11:24 am | |
| Beautiful Facade
Now i see you in a different light,
My Heart feels so despised.
Yes, everything is not what it seems,
My eyes you've really decieved.
You're my beautful facade,
Yes my Beautiful, decietful facade. |
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Grunge[C]ro[ss]
gfx crew
 
Age : 23
Joined : 06 Jun 2007
Posts : 6634
Location : Konoha
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Wed Dec 12, 2007 11:33 am | |
| You made this? Familiar, parang kanta. 
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xegben
Admin
Age : 23
Joined : 17 May 2007
Posts : 3807
Location : Kabacan - Davao
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Wed Dec 12, 2007 8:37 pm | |
| this sounds so emo...
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artlink
Anbu
 
Age : 20
Joined : 03 Jul 2007
Posts : 352
Location : somewhere there
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rai-za
vip
Age : 20
Joined : 01 Dec 2007
Posts : 2333
Location : SAGUING, MAKILALA
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-brychie08-
Anbu Assasin
Age : 19
Joined : 06 Dec 2007
Posts : 106
Location : midsayap--davao
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:47 am | |
| nkow!!!npaka,poetic mu nman.... 
nice poem,digs deep... |
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insomniatic_poet
Anbu Assasin
Age : 19
Joined : 10 Dec 2007
Posts : 131
| | Subject: tnx... Sun Dec 23, 2007 2:30 pm | |
| | tnx..hmm..mga diary entry ko lhat ng pinopost ko..mas mganda para sakin kasi kung it is expressed through a poem a nararamdaman mo..it is more expressed and felt rather than said.. |
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Jackofalltrades
Anbu
Age : 19
Joined : 30 Jan 2008
Posts : 349
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:53 am | |
| Facade ........ let me see......it is The front of a building; esp., the principal front, having some architectural pretensions. Thus a church is said to have its facade unfinished, though the interior may be in use.....
What is your definition of facade?  |
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-aLeTsiRc-
Anbu
Age : 21
Joined : 16 Jan 2008
Posts : 402
Location : Kabacan
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:40 pm | |
| | insomniatic_poet wrote: | | tnx..hmm..mga diary entry ko lhat ng pinopost ko..mas mganda para sakin kasi kung it is expressed through a poem a nararamdaman mo..it is more expressed and felt rather than said.. |
YUP..oo nga sis..kulang nlng sa poem mo haluan ng melody at rythm pwde na maging kanta..NICE gud!!!Keep up the good work..at keep yourself inspired..God bless..lab yah,mwahhh!!!
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Tamahome
Anbu
Age : 23
Joined : 07 Dec 2007
Posts : 269
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:14 pm | |
| | elegante....... |
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insomniatic_poet
Anbu Assasin
Age : 19
Joined : 10 Dec 2007
Posts : 131
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:07 pm | |
| | Jackofalltrades wrote: | Facade ........ let me see......it is The front of a building; esp., the principal front, having some architectural pretensions. Thus a church is said to have its facade unfinished, though the interior may be in use.....
What is your definition of facade? |
if typed in the computer or searched in the dictionary..it also means pretense..hmm...
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insomniatic_poet
Anbu Assasin
Age : 19
Joined : 10 Dec 2007
Posts : 131
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:10 pm | |
| | xegben wrote: | | this sounds so emo... |
why? tatanungn ko muna xa xarili ko..jejjeje...dinededicate ko ito xa isang tao eh..hmm..i thought he was different but he was just like the rest...his looks and actions was really decieving..
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•iknowimKYUT•
Raikage
Age : 19
Joined : 05 Mar 2008
Posts : 1255
Location : kabacan
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:47 pm | |
| nice poem...
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i'm okay
i miss you...
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Kw!st!ne
sannin
Age : 25
Joined : 02 Mar 2008
Posts : 1805
Location : somewhere
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:51 pm | |
| hhmmmm the poem is deep... the emotions tell about pain and being deceived....
tragic.... but might be a way of coping with the situation....
i appreciate the rhyming of the lines.... free-flow....
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•iknowimKYUT•
Raikage
Age : 19
Joined : 05 Mar 2008
Posts : 1255
Location : kabacan
| | Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Thu Mar 13, 2008 4:16 pm | |
| gani te..very deep jud
maka nose bleed...
hehehe
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im okay
i miss you... |
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