My Beautiful Facade

Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:48 pm

to reme...

hehehe... yung message nya madaling intindihin... yung thoughts and emotions niya as writer nakakalunod... it talks about a feeling that has been bottling up and has come into the point of bursting.... kung sa novel pa, this poem is the denouement... kasi may realization na ... tho' pag binasa mo siya through and through, sa last part you'll see that there's hope and strength na.... as far as the words and meaning is concerned, i think average ang difficulty of pag-understand....

well-written and touching...

to jackofalltrades naman.... facade kasi in literature and in poetry means masking something or deception through creating a different person/thing instead of the real being/thing.
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everything in life is a two-edged sword... the thin division of labeling it as an opportunity or a problem is determined by our cognition... it's a matter of how you see it... now, is your glass "half-empty or half-full?"

Anbu Assasin Age : 19 Joined : 10 Dec 2007 Posts : 131

Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:10 am

welcome... i have been writing poems way back in high school and i have come to sense lang something deep... ganun naman kapag we are expressing emotions through art eh (or literature...)

enhance mo pa skills mo...try mo haiku or free verse pa... Cheers!
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everything in life is a two-edged sword... the thin division of labeling it as an opportunity or a problem is determined by our cognition... it's a matter of how you see it... now, is your glass "half-empty or half-full?"

Anbu Assasin Age : 19 Joined : 10 Dec 2007 Posts : 131

thank you po uli..hmmm..

i'll enhance my craft and hopefully i can also write short stories also..i already know my problem coz sometimes i get too wordy..jejeje..thanks po uli mam kwistine!!!

ingat always..
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Subject: Re: My Beautiful Facade Tue Oct 07, 2008 11:56 pm

don't mention it lec... try mo rin mag-read ng mga malalim na type ngliterature... kasi iba rin ang effect...

Smile

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everything in life is a two-edged sword... the thin division of labeling it as an opportunity or a problem is determined by our cognition... it's a matter of how you see it... now, is your glass "half-empty or half-full?"

Anbu Assasin Age : 19 Joined : 10 Dec 2007 Posts : 131